TICK-TOCK is
the sound coming from the Grandfather clock. I draw the curtain aside and look down
onto the cobbled street. Pitch black. Gas flames don’t dance and flicker in this
part of town. No one lingers in the
street below. Not a soul. TICK TOCK.
It’s All Hallows Eve, Festival of the Dead. It’s cold. And icy, and almost time. TICK-TOCK
My
fingers tremble against the rich velvet curtain. What will I do if she doesn’t come before
dawn? What will I do? Unease coils like a snake in the pit of my
stomach waiting to strike. TICK-TOCK
Footsteps on stair
treads, followed by a faint tapping on the door tell me she is here. I take a deep breath, inhale the air. Human smells, decaying human, stench of rotting
flesh. The tapping is repeated. I open the door to find her standing there. I stare. Just a girl this time, maybe twelve
or thirteen, smiling, cheeks rosy red, eyes ocean blue.
‘Good evening,’ she says in her innocent
child’s voice,’ I’m here to save your soul.’
It’s the
truth. I open the door wide. I must invite her in, as I always do, this
child with the hauntingly beautiful skin, the fairest hair, the fancy clothes,
and the dark bottomless eyes.
‘Come in.’ TICK-TOCK
She steps over the threshold into the room,
disguised in her human skin. I close the
door behind her and her eyes follow mine, as she turns her head towards the
four poster bed. The innocent infant slumbers, in a drug induced sleep, prepared
by my own hand.
The girl looks
back over her shoulder and smiles. Macabre and mocking, the transformation has begun.
Evil dark eyes flash me a warning.
‘You can leave
us now…your soul is saved…again. Skin
peels away before my tear filled eyes. Revealing
scales that glisten, with putrid slime, her voice grows hoarse.
‘Go…go now….’ She screeches. I escape, fleeing
down the stairs, I hear the crack of bones, the ripping of cloth and the howl
of death that follows.
I am a monster. TICK-TOCK

Well that was creepy. Unsettling even. Yikes. Well done. I'm quite uneasy now.
ReplyDeleteVery, very creepy! The repeated tick tock helped fuel the desperation the protagonist must have been feeling to be willing to offer up a baby.
ReplyDeleteWishing you continued success with the A to Z challenge,
Jocelyn
I think I held my breath for most of that Maria. You have a talent for suspense and horror. Phew! xx
ReplyDeleteVery, very scary Maria. And you have such a nice face! It reminds me of a poem I learnt as a child and I wonder if anyone else knows it:
ReplyDeleteThere's someone at the door said gold candlestick
Let her in, let her in, quick
There's a small hand groping at the handle
Why don't you turn it said gold candle
No, don't go said the hepplewhite chair
Lest you find a strange lady there
Yes, stay where you are whispered the while wall,
There's noone there at all
I know her foot grey carpet said
Who but I should know her light tread
She shall come in said the open door
But not, said the room, go out any more
L.G Smith - Thank you...
ReplyDeleteJocelyn - I wasn't sure about using the tick-tock, so thank you for that comment.
ange - Thanks ange!
Maggie - I haven't heard it before, interesting.
Thanks a million, Maria! I read this before I turned the lights out for sleep last night. Scary! [My phone wouldn't let me comment so had to wait til now!]
ReplyDeleteTotally creepy. Yep, certainly feeling uneasy now! Niiiice. ^_^
ReplyDeleteRos - What can I say? I like the creepy stuff!
ReplyDeleteileandrayoung.com - Uneasy can be a thrill...